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Though I’d change the stars
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To make you happy,
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I cannot change me. *
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Love me for who I am *
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And so, while winter breathes around us
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I fall into you. *
Author notes
'Yay Blue Potato's'
A contest entry
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Comments
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This is sooooooo pretty with the stars, the whole thing made me smile
Thanks so much for entering and best of luck in the contest x -
i just truly LOVE this
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Wow, such power in such fragility. Wonderful.
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So delicate and beautiful..the whole package!
Just lovely,
~Lisa~
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I love how you take something simple and yet say it in a slightly unconventional way here.
Yes -
Love, love, love!
Hugs, Moon
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I love it!
Thank you for entering my contest!!
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i love the design...and the poem...very very creative
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Wowww. Definitely loved this ! Incredible. Especially just the format of it was great. Beautifully penned, and set up, and just everything ! Thank you for entering & I wish you the best of luck! ♥
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wonderful write! this is simply breath-taking!
love it love it love it!
keep penning!!!
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I like the way this is set up and the background is beautiful. Nice job on this write, and thanks so much for entering my contest. Blessings, Patty
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What a gorgeous piece you have
penned here! I love the thought
that you put into this one. Very
beautiful with an enchanting
background. Congratulations to
you on your Gold, it was well deserved!
I hope that you do well with it once
more in this contest. Good luck to
you and thanks a lot for sharing it here!
Jeremy0826 -
well done
A lovely poem short and sweet I like the way you have set it out good luck in the contest. -
i dont know what to say... i love it!!
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I enjoyed this very much.
i love how you used the air...and darkness...to add
texture and layers to the poetic form!
well done! very well done!
ears/Seattle
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Wonderful write!
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oh hun, this is sooo beautiful! i adore this.
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The verdicts are in and you captured all the hearts of the die hard romantics with this. Well done.
Peace & Light,
Tom B.
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This is so amazingly wonderful...It so full of love...excellent and congats on the gold...novy
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this truly did desirve gold
great job
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Wow, no wonder it's gold! I like that "while winter breathes around us/I fall into you."
Congratulations!
Marlene -
Very Very well done and presented---Well deserving of the Gold---Congratulations!
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Absolutely brilliant!!! This is so very clever and the words are just delightful and perfect for Weltt and I. I love, love love this! Thank you
Love, C
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