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Watery Eyes

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Steel blue eyes
pools of sweet water
reflections of love
hope and desire

through out the years
I never forgot
the magic they held
each and every drop

Oceans of love
I see in your eyes
tides of pleasure
when I'm by your side

rivers of joy flows
from our love shared
Passion floods
when we come together

I look deep in
seas of blue
unconditional love
for me from you

I close my eyes
I lose myself in
pools of sweet water
your eyes of steel blue

Author notes

Your eyes have hypnotized me for years, I could never forget how they made me feel when you looked at me.

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  • black hearted rebel
    July 23
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    This was an excellent write..thanks for sharing..good luck in the contest

  • black hearted rebel
    July 23
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    WOW


  • Sandygram silver member
    July 16
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    Beautiful Write!!!!

    Well the reader sure gets lost in your words. They are lovely and heartfelt. I can relate but I get lost in his brown eyes. A lovely poem and a pleasure to read. Thanks for the smiles your words bring. Take care.

    Bless You,
    Sandy