Sanguine nature boils,
upon his constant sadistic skin.
While adulation thrashes,
within every audacious cell.
Gaining amiable nothingness.
Author notes
Your prompt: "Hate is easy, love takes courage"
15-20 words ONLY
A contest entry
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Comments
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whoa!
i could the hate in your words.
i never thought you could describe it in such a way.
this was really good.
good luck,thanks for entering -
beautiful poem. i like how you you can describe so much pain in so little lines. very strong opening and finishing lines. although the title is slightly weak. but a minor put back. i love it!
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Congrats on the goldie..very well deserved!
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great interpretation
congrats on the gold!!
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This is excellent...Love all the lines...Simply amazing on the prompt...so much more impact than mine!
All the best dear
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the imagery that you used it quite vivid. excellent take on the prompt.
good luck
kat
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wow. some stunning visuals
wonderful take on the prompt
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