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controlled…

Winter
opened gates,
to realms burning
their statements
forever; on your mind

Repeatedly reaching
Weak,
and needing to feed
the dependency of
domination

planning, never to lose…

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  • Never.Give.Up
    July 18, 2008

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    WOW, it like it wants to burn its words into your brain.

    Well done on the silver, and I wish you Wonderful ideas for the future.

    Rose


  • KayJay
    July 11, 2008
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    Well done and well deserving of the silver...
    Ken


  • sailor ptolema
    July 11, 2008
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    yay! high ho SILVER! Congrats!!! I loved this ~

    ~Pt.


  • Brit-Girl
    July 11, 2008
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    great take ion the prompt, love the tone


  • Cannonsfire
    July 11, 2008
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    Oooh I reallylikeyour take on this Cuz, well done and good luck Love, C


  • sailor ptolema
    July 11, 2008

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    OH OH OH!! so, cool. I love this I love the idea of passive absorption of media...the way your portray it is quite haunting...!

    I love it.

    Pt~


  • notorious gold member
    July 11, 2008

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    "opened gate's"
    Should be 'gates'...the gate isn't possessive of anything.

    "to realms burning their statements"
    Likey!! =D

    "dependency of domination"
    Oh yes...I know what you're talking about (or at least...I think I do?)

    Good luck


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 11, 2008

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    Ohhh now this is fascinating!! It's like the media burning images and thoughts into us that we become dependent on!

    Wicked!


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    July 10, 2008
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    I can't wait!

  • sailor ptolema
    July 10, 2008
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    yay Cin! g'luck!

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