Last night when you told me to close the door as I leave,
my heart found it hard to believe
that you were throwing me out
when I am the love that your life is about.
So that is why I asked you over here tonight.
I wanted to see if I could do anything to make this right.
Baby, you knew that I was a virgin when we first met
and that cuddling and kissing was all that you'd get.
You told me that you loved me and was willing to wait
until you could buy me a ring and set a wedding date.
Then you met her and she changed your mind
after she smiled at you and gave up the behind.
I know that you're surprised that I already knew
about you running around and being untrue.
But I'm not mad and to show you that I'm not...
just check out my new teddy. Isn't it hot!
I want to make love to you, Baby. I really do!
Just to prove that I really do love you.
Relax, Honey and enjoy the ride.
As I lose all inhibitions... nothing, I'll hide.
Was that good for you, Sugar? I know that it was!
You said I do that better than a hooker does.
Didn't know that I had it in me, now did you, Boo?
But I just spent two hours making love to you.
All of this to stop you from leaving me behind.
But guess what, Baby? I've changed my mind.
You can get up and get dressed now that I've been relieved.
Oh, and by the way...close the door as you leave!
Author notes
OPTION #2
A contest entry
- Oh, and by the way... by Elrenia.
300 points, ended July 28, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Jessi-Desensytized a.k.a. BabyChronic0304 *OPTIONS* by Jessi-desensytized.
450 points, ended August 13, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Face dropped 2 da flo
This is by far the best Ive read today.
It has realness and humor knockinng at the door.
I love how you turned and told him off. Oh yeah, you are going to go far with poetry sista!
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HaHaHa!
That's the way to tell 'em. Go get 'em girl!
Red hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Regards,
DeGraw
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The story continued to take me
down memory lane of an ex so many years ago. This was wonderful, very detailed and well penned in every stanza. Good luck in the contest.
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