I would rather
x.x{die}x.x
than dine with you.
I would rather
s-t-a-r-v-e
than surrender.
I fight my own battle [inside] of my brain
&& you are not
*helping*
..:me:..
(I can defeat my own ƒear of ƒood,
and, while you D.
R.
O.
W.
iN.) your p(it)y,
I will look back to this feast of {X[lies]X} as I
∞laugh∞
A contest entry
- DirtyPretty - Prewrites or Fresh by Midnight-x-Rose.
450 points, ended July 30, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very strong and expressive... I like the mockery in this, it's very angry to me, or at least it feels that way. I like how you play this onto the eating disorder along with the bitterness and humour side of things.
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I struggle with an eating disorder and this is really good at describing it,whether you know the pain of an ED or not,this is very good and i relate really good.=]
thank you and good luck in the contest.
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