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Burns

It burns like hell in reins
As An uncontrollable pit
but tis only my vein

An empty whole that dwells
erasing the tick of life
churning the mind into a shell

Just a lonely being
Of the wrinkled wrapper
Who’s answer is only fleeing

Tis haunted by thoughts
Caving in on one’s self
Pending with only naughts

Once depended upon affection
Now reduced to nothing
But the longing of being beckoned

Huddled in a distant corner
Remembering moments
Debating on ending with a blunder

Unknowing of what is to become
Of the limp body
Frightened by life so gruesome

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