Does he know?
Just how beautiful he is?
When he fidgets with his brunett hair,
Or when he talks too much,
or even when he dosn't say a word-silent?
Does he know he's beautiful?
No.
Will he ever know?
I hope so.
I love him in eveyway,
No matter on the day.
He's my friend-but I love him.
So. Will he ever know?
I love you!
Author notes
I wrote this for a friend of mine that i'm crazy about-but he's moving away in a while.
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Have you every felt like this?
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OMG I can exactly relate
I love it. Poweful expression. = ) -
very powerful poem, i like this keep writing <3
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I'm sorry to hear he is moving away.
Your use of imagery is very powerful; I can feel emotions through the words. Especially the mini-conversation you seem to be having with yourself...it's very poetic. A few spelling errors, and maybe some awkward punctuation for a poem, but nonetheless very enjoyable.
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