It's like five o'clock
man, whose to blame?
injury caused
upon on my friend
co-worker maybe
but whose to say
He's bleedin' in the seat
I'm drivin' away
where do I go?
I call up the man
what about tomorrow?
all the asshole says
not "hows Steve doin'?"
not "is he ok?"
just go to the cheapest - hospital please
theres only five of us on the bottom
holdin' up his damn chair
he's claimin' for the best
but his money is scarce
I just wanna vent
to anyone who don't care
smash up the chair
burn down my apart
then piss on the fire
but I'd prolly kill a child
Ill hurt my liver instead
and think about striking
with all my non-union
half-ass kind of friends
Author notes
Shitty day at work...
A contest entry
- Lets be Honest by St. Poet.
900 points, ended July 15, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very Emotional piece, sorry for your sucky day : P
But anyways I could feel the hate like radiating form this poem, it had a really srtong feel to it...
Good work
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Good Job
Great emotion, i love the style. Its more like a story though, and less like a poem.
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Awwwee I absolutely loved the poem! Im sorry you had a shitty day at work.. but hey.. its work lol..
Great write anyway has a nice flow to it 
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WOW! sounds like it... nice piece but im sorry truth is something shitty...
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