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The Thorn






 

Walls of circumstance

 

 

  Held my heart

 

 

 

Like the rose petal

 

 

 

   Holds the essence

 

                             Of Donna

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • sailor ptolema
    July 12, 2008

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    OH~ how lovely, just wonderful! You pulled something amazing out of the prompt! Congrats on gold!!

    ~Pt


  • Star Shine
    July 11, 2008
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    How wonderful this is, what a salute to the senses. Beautifully wrought.


  • sheltered gold member
    July 11, 2008
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    Sweet...


  • Lavender Butterfly
    July 10, 2008
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    Wow ~ STUNNING!


  • vici377
    July 10, 2008

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    15 brilliant words..and a very powerful ending..thanx so much for sharing..and best of luck in the contest..blessings..namaste..


  • poet2angels gold member
    July 10, 2008
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    Sigh...
    Always, I sigh when I read you


    Lynda

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