Nuts, alas, I used to love em.
Now, I can't bear the thought of em.
Feeding peanuts to a squirrel,
along came a pretty girl.
Sharing peanuts in the shell.
Marriage turned my life to hell.
I hate nuts without a doubt.
I think of them and I pass out!
Author notes
Bring It On! by: AliceinPoetryLand
Option 3 Fear of nuts in 50 words
In a list
A contest entry
- Bring It On! by AliceinPoetryLand.
2000 points, ended July 11, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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lol
I can relate to the girl and marriage part lol
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Excellent
Such a masterful use of rhyme as always. And with that wonderful dash of humor. Congratulations on the honorable mention.
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Excellent
Great story told in this, even though it wasn't a perfect ending!
Your flow and rhyme are wonderful.
Thanks so much for entering our contest
Gaylene
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