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disposable/forgettable

we met at a plice parade
one simple rape soon you were made
my swe eet grenade
you don't need be afraid
there's a soldier in you.

now and burst right on through the door
I tell you she's well worth fighting for
with every doubt dies a little more
(to her thoughts are so see through/ do you think she'll forgive you?)
          don't know
(see the flag that you bear is torn/
(see your flag underwear is torn

(as your face shudders with scorn
(as your face fills with popcorn

    you duly smell.

she don't need her cliffs look so forlorn
she'll be ours to burn

I gave you your life and your name
now it's time, want them back again
plastic exploosive
        forgettable.
don't fear;.. your cat'll secede you
  and it will be closer

recieved an old letter form the pound
says you hoped things turned out better next time round
signed paw print dirt moist fresh from your mound
so you can just say well aye..
don't matter.

plus it's only you(canned laughter)
  All that I want you do do is(silence)








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The systemn only lets you put in one but I'm not sure if that's intended or not, so I'm chucking another in here. Just ignore it if you want.
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INSECTICIDE

And the hills around dunkirk are written with tracks,
she's never comin back
Another log world of insects and moistrotting life,
burn it down from the stacks
sweet tony the butcher came to cheer me up,
let's go see some racks
And the violence is silent it don't got no fight,
it's just a heard attack        (this line should probably be changed, cause of faker)

Taint blood on the forehead just raining
so stay inside or not the same
cos it sure aint you on the landslide
or elsewhere a callin my name

And when all these geetars are over
it'll prob ab ly be nice to reclaim my brtain
but I know then that I'll 'ave just lost some more of you
And it sure won't be just quite the same

  Nostalgic dreams of necrophilia
  in the good old good time daze
  maybe's just me but p'haps is something
  but t'wasn't all that better then
  What, seems I forgot a'ready
  so you see aint much more left reason for
  bout but that I love for you.
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          Yeah, heres another. Diff genre.
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Hail Hail Dionysis
E'en though you don' exist
Let me know jes how to kiss
Irresolutely n absolutely (comment..Well, she sure know what 'e means)
I love you with a love that aint real but for now
'tain lus'tainted
It's jes' the way you are
  Let You Drive My Car
Til don' know where we are
And we get lost and murdered in the bush
Daytripper can figure thatone out.
Save some for later
Now you won't ever leave me
That madness that the brain can't
get or lose fulfilled
              there aint no way
        (sherry, though a girl's drink, poet yet you're making me)
        (w'in you lies the cast lazy condescensia
                                                        neccesary)
        (And (if) somethin's in there then well you can set it free
        (for I've not the energy,
        (NO I"VE NOT THE ENERGY                                  )
Surrender, Jeff can choose my mood
So it's all reformed before it's wrote
Inseperable beauty; you and that satisfied mind of yours.
And you've finished so it's gone
'cause, how can it go on w'out you, girl
but
yet so we go on without.

        So girl girl girl, go to sleep now, yet I can't go back t'it now
        My mediate girl, for the real world's somewhere tween you now, here, tomorrow.
And you're asleep now,
and reality is just a blur now
                  mental haze, commercial gaze, won't seem to count'r'act wout your focus
or is it

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  • I want to know how it sounds!!!!
    -best of luck!

    • Hungry Joe
      April 15
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      Like Radiohead's "fake plastic trees". I wrote it when I had the song stuck in my head, so it's kinda plaigurism. Not really, its more a wierd al sort of mock up.


  • Emerald Lass
    August 3, 2008

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    OH my GOODness and LOOK at THAT big long line of fabulous lyrics that has made me very thirsty, now. Now I can see why people have to eat and drink a lot when they're out on a date.


  • Brandan Shamaya
    July 11, 2008

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    the first one is good though, i feel like its missing something, the second is good and flows well and the third is pretty good

    thanks for entering

    • Hungry Joe
      July 22, 2008
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      what do you mean, you can't do girl's perspective...(not mine, just saying)... the presets did it quite awesomely, and it would be even more interesting in metal. you should try it sometime, transvestiteism is rad.

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