Tangled up on natural sands,
her copper curls rustling in the vacant zephyr,
her face, it glowed-
though she was no luminary mind.
It shone-
though hardly immaculately polished.
It was so perfect-
even with superficial blemishes.
But that is love,
Me loving her - for she is beauty
and beauty is mistakes.
In a list
A contest entry
- Make me want to fall in love (2) by Spiritual Soul.
1000 points, ended July 19, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow that's so beautiful, I love the last 2 lines "for she is beauty and beauty is mistakes" I think that when you love someone for their imperfections, is when you truely are in love. Beautiful poem, thanks for your entry!
Blessings,
~Michaela~ -
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Thanks :)
I am so glad that you like this!!
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♥ What a Beautiful Truth ♥
All my best in the contest
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Thankies
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