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neutral

love is all sorts of things
falling in love at first is one of the first beautiful things
when a guy really loves you genuinely for who you are
he treats you sweet and fine
like you're the princess of the world
love can be so sweet to you, you feel you can never live without it
to be in love is the first steps of life
love can be good and bad
but when you're in love and you have a good partner by your side you feel like a million bucks
and also the luckiest person in the world
you just feel so jittery and nervous when you love or fall in love with someone
and sometimes you have doubts
does he love me too?
will he accept me?
will i ever find love?
but in the end most of the time it works out
it takes time but you'll get there
love is a bit of both things so. . .
you could say it's neutral

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  • Spiritual Soul
    July 11, 2008

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    That's a great answer to what lov is like, that it's neutral, I like that. This was a great poem, I liked how you described what it's like to fall in love and be in love. Thanks for entery my contest!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~