Ahhh... Immortality.
After the death of my earthly flesh,
my spirit will fully embrace it.
For I'm truly made
in my Creator's Image
and filled with His Divine presence.
How can anyone doubt...
The premise of my logic?
Ahhh... Immortality.
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A contest entry
- Immortality... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 23, 2008, 19 entries
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You gotta, in spirit and in truth. Clever write. Well done. Blessings.
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The premise indeed! Bravo!
The hope and Glory...Praise God!
God Bless and keep you!
Annette
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History is immortal
Existence is proof. Immortality is the goal.
I enjoyed your poem and hope you have a good weekend
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This is a touching piece though very short but every effective my friend....Thank you so much for entering my contest..
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Wonderful take on the prompt. Only one way to get that immortality.
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no doubt here my friend,
equisite
Ahhh... Immortality
God bless...
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