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Love's Tune


Love,
like many other feelings
have fragile hands that hold them.
Draping fragrant silk over glittered hearts
we sometimes tremble at just one tiny application.
In Love,
we share our deepest fears
knowing that the other would never abuse them.
Hand in hand we swallow our past tears and slide into the freedom
that this feeling has unchained us from; the sphere of two engaged in trust.

Now,
entangled deep within shared auras
we harmoniously slip and slide in the gentle tune
of our beating hearts in collaboration with eachothers mind -
we burst into butterflies of relief, and fall sound asleep in the aroma.
Forever,
we share a bond that cannot be broken,
the faith between two hearts that share in sync
the Love God has shown us how to use in a delicate manner..
All for one, One for all - together we'll glide through life's garden of sweet surrenders.

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  • januaryrain gold member
    August 13, 2008
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    Beautiful love poem. Congrats on the gold. Great write, makes me want to fall in love.


  • Spiritual Soul
    July 11, 2008

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    wow this is breathtaking. So beautiful, the words you used painted a picture of what love looks and feels like. This was an amzing write, thank you so much for your entry!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~