Gathering ashes of lover's burn
flesh reborn
wings unfurl, charred
shattering light screams
over sinful bloodied lips
Pale is Lucifer's concubine
that only sees within
Soul devoured in decadent obliteration
Author notes
Visual prompt: Bringer Of Death by *SAB687
30 Words
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A contest entry
- Quickie *2 ~ Dark...3 more entries please by Unsigned.
450 points, ended July 12, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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~smiles~....very good write poet...shame there have been limited comments on this..
Well thats lucky for me I guess...well done
Simon
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shattering light screams
over sinful bloodied lips
that only sees within
Soul devoured in decadent obliteration
you got such an amazing talent! I love this poem its so enrapturing!
The last sentence is just amazing something that reminds me to Stoker's pieces. Loved it!
the ending of the first verse... quite a powerful image, and you also portray her as egocentric, selfish, something they are, seeking nothing but to quench their desires.
great write!
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