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Deity

Missing image

Two covered by a shroud of oneness

reigning supreme in a chaotic world,

this three dimensional deity

delights in having her cloak unfurled.


To explore the depths of her beauty

she illuminates the darkest night,

thunderheads roil all around her

sweeping her up in perilous plight.


 

Clairvoyant queen- guardian of the black abyss

seals your fate with just one kiss...

A contest entry

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  • Frozentearz gold member
    July 22

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    ooh wow sista, wonderful work here and congratulations
    on your award so glad to have some time this am morning to catch up a bit.
    Love and Light
    Tearz

  • goalsv
    July 11
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    Very good creativity from the picture. A deep and dark look at it. Nicely written.

  • ShelleyA gold member
    July 11

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    Good title. 60 words exactly. A very good write and character study of the picture prompt. Good imagery, flow, rhyme and tone. Vivid descriptives. Lovely depth of feeling. Nice rhythm. Good word choice, alliteration and nice assonance. Thank you for your entry.