Vision impaired, my view is blocked
there’s no way in this gate is locked,
are rumours true, these stories hidden
some have seen yet most forbidden ?
Beyond I’ve heard a mighty lake
is filled with treasure free to take,
but holds a price so dear to pay
forever treasures there will stay.
I need to see if this is true
why is this secret kept from view,
It’s said that those who seek will find
so why then here, am I still blind?
I walk this path home every day
yet held within, known not what lay,
there must be something kept inside
whatever’s there, these people hide.
Facts as yet I’ve not revealed
this wall is tall it’s all concealed,
I’d love to know if stories told
are real, or fiction I’ve been sold.
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Comments
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Thank you for your entry in the contest. Excellent rhyming and good flow...Sue and Jeff
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Very nice work. great flow and the rhymes produce a very well rounded feel to each line. It's quite suprising to read someone which such a similar take on jeff's promt, i think it's a very well written story.
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well done dear as the imagery is profound and filled such thought that keeps you entranced in the write from beginning to end. best wishes and many blessings always xxx
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