We were flying high
Oh so high
Nothing could touch us
Not in the sky
We didn’t expect it
We didn’t know
Humans had firepower
Now they show
All the lights and blasts
Worry all around
The fear of getting hit
And plummeting to the ground
So with our lives
We retreat to our home
The ship went so fast
The fastest its flown
We’ll never go back
Especially not on July 4th
Their weapons showed us
What those humans are worth
Author notes
Option 6: the alien one.
A contest entry
- Bring It On! by AliceinPoetryLand.
2000 points, ended July 11, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
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Excellent! I really enjoyed reading this and hiow you wrote from the aliens point of view! Great flow and rhyme in this to
Thanks so much for entering our contest
Gaylene
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Thanks for having the contest. It was alot of fun to write about something like this
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wow this is grat!!! i love the rhyming!
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Thank you^_^
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