Alone in your room again
With nothing but whiskey and a razor
Tears openly fall and deep down
You know, everything's not gonna be alright
You go to school with your head hung low
Big black clothes leave nothing exposed
Your an outcast
Completely alone in the world
Chorus:
On and on this story goes
It tells every lie you ever told
Leaving you broken and in repair again
Picking up those missing pieces
It's too much, the pain
That's always following you home
Making up your mind
This is your last night alive
Chorus:
On and on this story goes
It tells every lie you ever told
Leaving you broken and in repair again
Picking up those missing pieces
As your world falls away
You realize you didn't have a chance anyway
Just another lost soul
Just another fallen angel
Chorus:
On and on this story goes
It tells every lie you ever told
Leaving you broken forever
The shattered pieces on the floor
Author notes
Well, this took more effort than usual, making it able to sing and still sound good D: Still, I'm proud of it! R&R please!
A contest entry
- Music To My Ears by Brandan Shamaya.
600 points, ended July 22, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very nice, i liked it, and i think he will too (Brandan Shamaya) i think you've got a very good chance at placing this was great in my opinion
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very nice
"Just another fallen angel" earned you major brownie points
thanks for entering
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