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save me

waiting, with wide eyes
i'll lye here tonight
waiting for your smile
to defeat my dark fright

shivering, like a rose in snow
i'll bathe in the icey box
knowing i'll have your embrace
releasing me from this shock

wondering, where you could be
i'll ignore the ticking clock
and think of your welcoming lips
that will break the metal lock

crying, with dry tears
i'll damn you to a similar fate
for never saving me
i'll be the one opening the gate

Author notes

a girl in her casket waitin fr her luv 2 save her from her suden death...srry if it was confuzin

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  • MightyBoosh
    July 10
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    I like it, I lost it in the last stanza, but i think I get it.

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