Stealth emotions gallop
Into the soft night
Breathing in the soot of desire.
Fire, lightning strike to the heart
The abundance of earth
In the goblet of the wind.
A waltz of electricity
This is the dawning of passion
Dance into the wind
Souls form together
A ballet of need
Distant drumbeats
Take in the wine of the earth
Dine with me under the moonlight
Author notes
'If You Could Ride The Wind, Breath The Fire, and Drink The Earth'
~ innocence forgotten..
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A contest entry
- Quote prompt.... by Angelflower.
600 points, ended August 10, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Outstanding
Beautiful flow and a nice, smooth ending.
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Flawless
Your form is outstanding, I've never come across a form like this!
I love your style of personification and your lexicon.
"Breathing in the soot of desire"This is a fantastic combination of introspective and extrospective.
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you rock mi
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ty very much
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