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The Fun House.

Disrupt the violence fetish for the whores,
they miss their prosthetic pricks bathed in virgin juices.

In this ruin of a family house,
where the daughter eats her excrement
and the son drinks her urine,
we sit and await the process of entertainment.

Disrupt the incestuous necrophilia between mother and daughter,
bring in the fathers lonesome prick for her to suck and swallow.

In this moment of painful laughter
invoked by a bald dog with a painted face
sodomising the youngest son of 4,
we sit and await for the commercial to end.

It doesn't,
and I've grown bored with this.

So we decapitate and mutilate the pretty one,
and put her head inside a hello kitty porcelain doll.

It didn't
and I grew bored with it.

So we ate the fingers of the malingering one
and put the rest of him in a painted box of cement.

Author notes

In this poem there are 2 referrences to actual murders that have happened.

The first mentioned is the "Hello Kitty Murder" as it is called. A clubhostess was decapitated and her head was put into a hello kitty doll, if I recall correctly. However, it wasn't of porcelain...

The second is the "Concrete-Encased High School Girl Murder Case", to directly quote Wikipedia. Basically a high school girl was kidnapped, tortured and later died due to the torture. Her body was found in a 55-gallon drum filled with cement.

I felt like noting this because those are some of my favourite murders, what with the murder of Elizabeth Short being the absolute favourite...

I truly hope with was worth your time, and I do hope you'll grant me the pleasure of knowing that it was so.

Thank you for reading.

~
Shock Dolly.

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  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    July 25, 2008

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    WOW....

    THIS IS AWFULLY IMPRESSIVE I MUST SAY!
    very well done.....
    I love the words you used and the way you described everything,
    pure genious! ^_^
    never stop writing,
    you have a talent for murderous poetry,
    GO YOU!


    • schadenfreude
      July 25, 2008
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      Haha! Thank you for the kind and immensely flattering words.

      And thank you for reading, not to mention commenting.


      • Synthetic-Nightmare
        July 25, 2008
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        ANYTIME!

        Glad to see there are other serial killer fans out there ^_^

        Most of my writes are from the minds of (fictional) serial killers, so it's fun to read others writes on the same topic!


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    July 25, 2008
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    this is a very cleverly penned poem and i read about those murders, mm good murders clever very clever *smiles* and you have a talent for writing very dark i like you already , this poem is wonderful it really is so vivid in its imagery so evil i like,
    all my love,
    kitty xxx

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