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Push Push

Push push
No miracles here
No light, no hope, no dreams

Chip chip
Carve away the ice
This frost has covered everything

Tap tap
You'll only hit stone
There's no soft matter here

Crack crack
The fissure deepens
What treasure lies within

Scratch scratch
The dust may settle
The chasm's deep, but empty

Swish swish
If not for breath
The air might remain still

Slosh slosh
A melted majesty
There's nothing to reveal

Squeak squeak
Wipe away the grime
From long forgotten windows

Push push
You push against a solid wall

Push push
You pushed so hard you never knew

There was no wall

You just pushed me
And I fell

Author notes

I don't get mad at the bf very often, but when it happened, this was the end result

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