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Former Self, Alleviated

Toxic sickness down my spine
Might be sick but doin' fine
A young girl asks, "What's wrong with me?"

The truth, it is, my girl
This is just one fucked up world
But life is *happiness, really

She lived in all regret
But those things I won't forget
We are not that blind, you see

She and I are quite a pair
Emerging from my past, Despair
Finally that girl is free

And you know what else?
That girl can breathe.

Author notes

This is what happens when I listen to old tapes of myself playing songs I wrote when I was 14-ish.

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