She stalks quietly into the night
quest for death,
lying in her eyes,
dark lady of demise
Cross her path
doom you shall meet,
ashes to ashes...
her mission complete.
Author notes
Bringer Of Death by *SAB687
30 words only
A contest entry
- Quickie *2 ~ Dark...3 more entries please by Unsigned.
450 points, ended July 12, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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a good poem penned - ah the steps; as silent as time, they flit across the breath of others as shapely mince pies (that's eyes to the cockneys!) throw out deceit, and her lithe form twirls the stars into spinning light, fast in the shadows.
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How do you do that..make your comments so poetic ? lol
thank you kind sir.
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~smiles~...this sounds like my ex-wife...lo
Wonderful write
Simon
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lol those evil ex's huh? Thank you my dear for your comment.
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You have done a great job with the prompt and have packed a great deal of imagery into so few words. This is powerful and an amazing write. Blessings, Patty
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My thanks to you for such an encouraging comment. I truly appreciate your kindness.
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A lot of imagery and unforced rhyme in 30 words--
Best of luck in the contest!!
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Thank you! It's hard to say much in so few words but there ya have it
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Wow Sis,
This is amazing! What a great job you did on this one!
Love that line,
"Cross her path
doom you shall meet,
ashes to ashes..."
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Aww you're so nice Nettie. Always saying the sweetest things hehe Thank you
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