My Cat Chloey
black and white
green eyes and pink nose
a fat tail with yellow claws
thats all of him
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Mommy's Lighthouse
this house
is white and green
and kinda funky
the rocks splash around
like an octopus in a flashing house
The door is locked without a key
how do you get in the house?
how do you make it big?
There are stairs
all the way all the way all the way
up to that house
and there are spiders
and lady bugs
and monsters in that house!
Author notes
Ethan has been begging to write a poem - so I wrote what he said lol
so interesting
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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These are fabulous ... I love that you used colors to effect the poems ... and although the vocab may be basic, which is to be expected, the images aren't tainted by flowery expression. Actually, these two are a breath of fresh air. *snicker*
Bravo Ethan, Bravo!
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awwwwwwwwww, I think Ethan has his Mommy's genes...
Great work, Sweetie!
I hope to see more of your great poems!!!
Aunt Lynda
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Aww cute! Love the ending of that first poem! 'that's all of him'
Ohh mommy's Lighthouse sounds a bit scary too!!
How precious that he wants to be a poet.. taking after mum! Keep up the writing Ethan!!
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awww they actually make sense! lmao the eyes thru a child indeed. how sweet!
Tasha
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Thanks sis!! He will probably have more - may need to make him an account one day
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I think these poems a quite adorable and actually quite brilliant really. It is quite interesting looking at the world through the eyes of a child.
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This is seriously adorable ^^
Keep up the good work, and don't quit writing, Ethan!
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He thanks you very much & was so excited to see these comments!
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awww he is such a cutie heh you should get him joined up to the site hun. a beautiful and creative piece
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I may end up doing that before ya know it lol He loves me to read to him and such when I am on - which I usually do not do until he is sleeping BUT
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Cool,
Taking after Momma, sweet indeed!
Thanks for sharing his playful poem, peace.
And Ethan, you
this poem, so on!
-Timothy aka poeticweaver
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Ethan told me to tell you thank you He loves to be read poems from here, and is just now geting to where he says he wants to write!
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