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Ignored

The pain,
running through me everyday.
No body is listening to what I say,
the words I utter are ignored.

 

Just your misunderstood punk ass kid,

with no one paying attention,

wont even give me the time of day.

As I sit here and write this song.

 

Some day this will be on top,

you'll all want to be there then,

now you walk right on bye.

Saying keep dreaming.

 

The anger,

could kill you all,

bring you straight to your knees,

with you begging no more please.

 

But I'll ignore you like you blocked me out,

say I'm just a kid,

and you hear look at all I did.

I landed your asses on the moon.

 

Taking off in flight,

lyrics never got so high before.

Listen to my words,

as I get higher.

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  • JustFallingApart
    July 12, 2008

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    very nice. I like this, hopefully it's what he's looking for, best of luck in the contest. hope you do well in the end


  • Brandan Shamaya
    July 10, 2008
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    lots of emotion, very powerful write