A red Rose
on the ground
in perfect condition
not a single leaf torn
The red beauty
sitting on my steps waiting
for a lover to pick it up
Author notes
R-red
this is an good idea! you should make another contest like this!
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A contest entry
- YOUR NAME IS BOLD COME WIN A GOLD!!! by black hearted rebel.
375 points, ended July 23, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very good
It's noy only pretty and cute, but it shows you have a poetic talent I think this is a very perceptive poem keep it up!
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GREAT!
Awwwwwwww love how you used this!I expected something about blood but you gave me something different!A lovely write and you're so young!Thanks for entering
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thx!
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This is a wonderful poem, I especially like the last line. Great job and good luck in the contest!
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