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welcome to my world

welcome to my world  what does this mean?
welcome to my world where i am surpreme

welcome to my world where visions all black
welcome to my world where your eyes will roll back

welcome to my world and smell the blood in the air
welcome to my world where survivers are rare

welcome to my world and hear all the screams
welcome to my world where not alls as it seems

come into my world and you'll enventually crack
welcome to my world NOW NEVER COME BACK

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  • misshugglebugglez
    February 4

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    wow, i liked this... it made me think! hooray! (i barely ever think, so this was good)
    this was really deep, and kinda dark too
    i loved it! <3
    hugggggggglez,
    -miss adria


  • Wulfys Broken Wings
    January 21
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    I enjoy this
    my world is some what the same way

    Message me back?
    -Blue

  • DonSulliven
    November 25, 2008

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    you know what this reminds me of? the point of no return from the phantom of the opera, except that son is abouy sex and i dont think thats what this is about, but the mood of the poem is very simular.


  • fangs to blame
    October 10, 2008
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    Vey dark and deep.


  • StarLightResurrects
    July 14, 2008

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    this is very .... um... wow? dark much? obviously ur world has alot of pain in it. last line is cool though lol
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