Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

To live on through the Earth

Immortality
To continue to exist
Forever

But immortality
Is not real
Is it?

We die
Our bodies decompose

Our children live on.
In a way, we live on too
For a piece of ourselves
Is given to our children
And to theirs
And so on.

But, with each generation
We fade away.

And so we die
We fade to nothingness
Or do we?

Matter is neither created
Nor destroyed,
Only recycled

The molecules,
The atoms,
The building blocks of ourselves
Dissolve

They dissolve into the Earth,
To replenish
To become the building blocks
Of another life

And so we continue to exist.
Our bodies’ cycle,
Between organisms,
And the abiotic environment.

One minute we are the air,
Then the ocean,
Then a scale on a fish.

We are recycled
And thus so
We achieve
Immortality

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 13, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    The journey is revealed and the life is defined...Thank you so much for entering my contest..my friend...


  • B.m.w
    July 10, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Beautifully done. Good luck in the contest. You deserve to get that gold! ^^


  • Maldronah
    July 10, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Whitman said it in four words:
    "All flesh is grass".