I've known you long enough to say this
You give me the chills of a breezing winter
And everyday, I hope to run into you once again
Maybe the words will come out without hesitation
But when you come near I forget all of my lines
So how can I put this? Where will this get me?
Will you listen or run away?
Is all of this worth it? Should I just hold it in?
I guess it's time for you to know...
Oh baby, I think I’m falling in love tonight
And it’s not so easy anymore; I can’t hide it from you
It’s true; you’re in all of my dreams
And will you give me a chance to try
Maybe you will see that I’m the one meant to be with you
Who knew, that I’d wish for you and me
When I'm with you I feel alive
Your eyes are the reflection of paradise
Surprising enough you've seen me at my best and worst
And all the time I wonder why this feeling is so immense
Well it's up to me now to strive and make this work
I'm here for you and I love you too
I'll do anything to take you for a ride
So hear me out at least for now
I'm not alone when I'm by your side
I say these words "To me you're the world
Everything you do completes my life”
If it's not enough, I'll be long gone
I hope these words don't push you too far
Author notes
This is just your average love song/poem. I didn't write it personally about someone, but to how I would normally feel in telling someone how I felt about them.
A contest entry
- Songwriting by Apocalyptic Scarves.
600 points, ended August 22, 2008, 51 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. very sweet. i like this
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This is so beautiful! I love the way you wrote this. It is so stunning and heartfelt. Beautiful within your words and the way it's spread across the screen! Fantastic. Beautifully penned hun. I love it!
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aww nice
this made my heart melt its soooo sweet and nice and the simple use of words is just well really awesome i loved this poem THANKSSSSS!! for wrighting it!! keep penning
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I think everyone has felt this feeling and wanted to say these words to someone....this was a very promising write, I think you have amazing potential...
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I loved this. Your notes surprise me as i would have been convinced by the clarity and the strength of emotion that you wrote this about a certain person. I know these feelings and some of the lines in the poem were particularly strong and really hit me. I loved the phrase "you've seen me at my best and worst"; This is often the case with those we love and those that mean the most to us. But you also really conveyed the confusion that can go along these feelings and i loved your use of questions especially, "Will you listen or run away?". Really Great work.
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this.. this is a perfect light rock love song. Get some wailing guitar and it'd be a great ballad. You're definately a better poet than most on this site. This is really great.
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