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This is it.......my last goodbye

For a moment in time..I thought you were mine.

You've turned days into months and months into years.

Waiting for you to shut-up and take me; despite all my fears...
of you with another one...and I with a fooled heart.

Still I wished you could have felt yours torn apart.

Always deciding to fail, when it was my win.
Loving you should be a sin.

My 10 commandments, not as simple as they seem:

1. Love me
2. Stay with me
3. always keep me warm at night.
4. Let me in!
5. Let's trust!
6. Less fuss!
7. Always leave me a kiss...
8. Together in bliss.
9. to put us first when we needed to.
10. To always love you.

Now I understand I am the fool; for wanting someone like you.
So Hard to please! you're such a tease!

for everything; from how you treated me.
I would have always stayed regretfully...

No more pain! No more lies...ENOUGH chances for romances...that is why, this IS
                   
                        My last goodbye.

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  • VanGoghNights
    July 12, 2008
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    AWESOME

    i loved it very much dear
    keep it up


  • XxAngelOfPoisonxX
    July 10, 2008
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    I really like this..I think the commandmets are a realy effective,
    Good write