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~Silhouettes of Mysticism~

Waves of purity splash,
sun drenched stone slate,
creating silhouettes of mysticism.

White lace pirouettes an ivory frame,
algae tendrils promenade a distinguishable face;
as nature back flips into cotton images.
Misty eyes transpire aberrations of
natures mysteries;

as sun particles display interest in this mirage.

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  • Kazytc silver member
    October 7, 2008

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    Woweee! Another Poet Laureate Poem!

    You are totally amazing, this is another incredible and phenomenal poem, you sure have talent and what an incredible way with words too, I am in awe, this was lovely and sooo soo enchanting as are you. Words were written for you to write with. You are a real Poet Laureate, incredible.
    No wonder this won a gold too.

    Waves of purity splash,
    sun drenched stone slate,
    creating silhouettes of mysticism.

    White lace pirouettes an ivory frame,
    algae tendrils promenade a distinguishable face;
    as nature back flips into cotton images.
    Misty eyes transpire aberrations of
    natures mysteries;

    You are amazing, what fabulous expressions. Woweee!
    Love it, well done just carry on writing.
    Best of Luck in all contests hope you win gold in them all you are one very phenomenal writer and poetess. You are as enchanting as your words and this picture prompt.

    Poetic Hugs,
    Kaz.
    Kazytc xxxx


  • marlene47 silver member
    July 11, 2008

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    I like the image you create in misty mysticism... as a wave momentarily transforms to a lady in lace, a shimmering mirage.
    Congratulations on the Gold.
    Marlene


  • Gypsie Ink
    July 11, 2008
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    Madainn mhath!

    Meala naidheacht oirbh on your gold shiny!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 11, 2008

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    Such gorgeous imagery, you guys are making this impossible to judge! I love what you've done here, 'nature flips back' awesome and so creative. Superbly penned. Thank you for your entry and good luck


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 10, 2008

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    Excellent take on the picture with an abundance of imagery--
    Best of luck in the contest!!


  • Unsigned gold member
    July 10, 2008
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    this is by far the best I have read..

    Well done you and HI!!!

    Simon

  • Gypsie Ink
    July 10, 2008

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    Beautiful!

    I love "algae tendrils" Can I have her hair? lol A magickal and enchanting write. Best of luck in the contest!


  • penman gold member
    July 10, 2008

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    Excellent

    Such a beautiful creation for the picture. With such eloquence choice of words. Best of luck in the contest.

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