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i let my girlfriend get away with murder

I let my girlfriend
get away with murder.

[literally.]

when she wrapped
her hands around
my throat
I didn’t fight back,
didn’t struggle.
instead of
scratching her DNA
under my fingernails
or grabbing for
a strand of hair,
I whispered her
name with my
dying breath

& let her murder me.

Author notes

lol. people always say, "they would let so-and-so get away with murder." the thought occurred to me, what if that was taken literally. lol.

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Comments


  • weird.quiet.girl
    July 10
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    lol very nice, i like it

  • DanielleNicole
    July 10

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    This is short but really takes away my breathe i love the way you worded it and the line"I whispered her name with my dying breath".