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Everytime ---

Every time you accuse me of not caring,
I want to breakdown before you.

Every time you tell me that I mean nothing to you,
My heart shatters into uncountable pieces.

Every time I gather those pieces,
You come back to me,
And weaken my inner resolve,

Every time I see you,
My heart fills with hope that you understand.

Every time you walk away from me,
Tears roll down my cheek.

Every time I want to tell you what you mean to me,
I fear the pain I might have to relieve again.

Every time…

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  • crimsondew
    April 13

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    Beautifully expressed..emotions put forward well here...
    Although in last line I think you mean ' relive' instead of 'relieve'. I make my share of typos too.


  • cheetahgal
    July 23, 2008

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    Wow! This is really good. I love the emotion behind your poems. You should publish this one at SW too.