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~Holding on~

Hearts suspended on strings,
guarded carefully.
Love inflating, elevating emotions,
to a higher plane.

A balloon easily burst by pain,
unwillingly releasing hot air,
penetrated with emotional distress.
Holding venerability close,
waiting for that special lovers breath to revive me.

Author notes

25-50 words
Picture prompt : Credit picture -- Low on LoVe by Alexandra Marrero from Deviantart.com

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    July 14, 2008

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    A great inspiration from the pic, truth and emotion within your words

    Thank you so much
    Good luck



    Cindy


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 10, 2008

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    Excellent portratal of the picture in a minimum of words--
    Very Very well done!
    Best of luck in the contest!


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    July 10, 2008
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    Well Done Nice Write Sis Good Luck with it