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Day 427: Spider Man Suicide...again

Sticky residue hangs from laces
Grieving parents hang their faces
One quick jolt to end it all
A cabled noose to catch his fall

When we go to cut him down
Congealed blood has now turned brown
Fingers, once used to play guitar
Won’t turn the keys to start his car

His eyes protrude from hollow past
His milky skin with grayish cast
The arms are stiff, but stiffer still
His lonely cat on window sill

The horror hidden in this mess
Isn’t in the note confessed
But what’s left after life retreats
When it defends and time defeats

We all must end the day’s charade
And march together in death’s parade
But keep in mind, if you choose to go
What deathly horrors you leave in tow

Author notes

MBorda
I didn't know what you meant by "AN BOX" for where to put 'Sara Sidle in my Idol" so I put it in the preview box.

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  • Georgia La Mariposa
    July 10, 2008

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    you put it in the right plaece your Author Notes Box Great poem i really enjoyed it, wehat a cool anmd interesting take on the prompt