Cracked skulls on headstones
A soul by the light divided
God and goddess dethroned
Harrowing, heralding time’s abided
On cankerous wings harkened
Apocalyptic thundering of hooves presided
A soul darkened
Author notes
enjoy.
A contest entry
- Quickie *2 ~ Dark...3 more entries please by Unsigned.
450 points, ended July 12, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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not bad....yip I liked it.
Well done and good luck
Simon

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aww the last line drove this poem home i loved it!! it was generouse with its imagery
thankyou,

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Pretty bold. Paints a few pictures that are related to give you a mood and then gives you an over all setting. A sense of triumph and darkness. I like this poem, well done. very nice

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love the word cankerous

lovely explanation of the title I must say!
you have written something here that could send chills up the spine of the not so normal
well done!





