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Harbinger

Cracked skulls on headstones
A soul by the light divided
God and goddess dethroned
Harrowing, heralding time’s abided
On cankerous wings harkened
Apocalyptic thundering of hooves presided
A soul darkened

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  • Unsigned gold member
    July 12, 2008
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    not bad....yip I liked it.

    Well done and good luck


    Simon


  • LaCkOfCoLoUr
    July 11, 2008
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    aww the last line drove this poem home i loved it!! it was generouse with its imagery
    thankyou,


  • Puppet
    July 10, 2008

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    Pretty bold. Paints a few pictures that are related to give you a mood and then gives you an over all setting. A sense of triumph and darkness. I like this poem, well done. very nice


  • Tattboyspet
    July 10, 2008

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    love the word cankerous
    lovely explanation of the title I must say!
    you have written something here that could send chills up the spine of the not so normal
    well done!