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My Friend

My friend is the comfort i feel at night,

Just before I drift off into sleep,

It is the will within me that says,

"Go ahead and do it,

you'll succeed in the end."

My friend is 100% pure,

And is forever and everlasting.

He is curiosity that fills me,

He brings the feelings of relief,

My friend is the power i feel,

When i want to accomplish some thing,

He is my lucky star - more than i expected,

because, My friend isn't just a friend,

He's a best friend,

And some one who means a lot to me,

And is one of a kind!!

Gate of memories will never close,

How much i mean every word of what I've written - no one knows,

Tears in my eyes will wipe away,

You in my heart will always stay.

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This is dedicated to a very dear friend, my dost!! love you!

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  • amandapoet15
    August 5, 2008

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    aww this is so freaking cute. awesome job. i really like it. keep up the good work. i look forward to reading more of your poetry.
    just too freaking good! i love it.