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Passing, Moments

In the heart and soul are cherished; memories of divine intrevention meet with a strangers words or touch, lost forever, yet kept close within our mind.

 

These things for which are never curse nor blessing haunt our present with the wanting of the past, mingling the paths we chose to follow.

 

The calling voice of mornings wake,the winds' breaking breath , the whispers of a lovers thoughts , are nothing to compare our first meeting or my desire for a next.

 

Come to me in my dreams again, and again until fate feels fit to match wants and desire with it's welcoming kiss, and in this life may we become what others envy.

 

My love is yours; in this life or one to follow; I wish nothing more then to be held within your heart; as I hold you within mine.

 

 

 

                                                     (CMD)

 

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  • I'm glad you uncapped your letters for this poem is very well written. Thank you for entering the contest and best of luck to you. Kahy

  • See? The message you want to impart and the feelings inside your poem is now clearly feel by your readers. Wish you luck in the contest you are in.

  • This piece is beautifully composed, very touching, yet this will be more interesting to read if this was written not in all capital letters but to normal ones.

    • Thank you for your comments I took what you suggested to heart and agree with thanks again


  • SeptemberFaith
    July 11, 2008

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    I love the need that drips from your words. Desire and fate are cousins... if you desire something long, hard, strong enough, fate may grant it to you. So nicely done.

    Criss

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