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[ Often I came across, ]

Often I came across,
you in the corner.
Artificial night with eerie,

walking with it's hundred feet,
engulfing the room,
once full of sweet memories of us.

I never understand
that black eyes
that sunken cheek
that skeleton body
that fake smile.
...................................................
Sword clashing,
corpse,everywhere.
In full speed,
the Machinery diligently produce
all those micro-size leucocytes armies.
The Centre had lost control over Machinery.
Civil war ignited.
Erythrocytes were losing,
with or without artificial armies
or allies from the other world.
.......................................................
Before your flight.
Before you sleep.
I need to tell you.

Words aren't everything.
Raised as a fighter,
I was never good with affection.
Nor showing emotion.
....
To fast it moves,
I cant catch the train.
So,instead,
I give you this.
A kiss.
To cover up all the words unsaid.

To wash away the agony.

Author notes

Well,I dont really have a friend with leukemia. But I do have a friend that had some cancer and had to remove her womb. This poem is actually to my close friend,who recently found out that he has some sort of heart dieases. I often unaware of him being sick as he is always happy and very gay. When I came across this contest, I had some vision that he was at the hospital,dying. So,I wrote this poem to tell him that i'm sorry i didnt notice his pain,and tell him everything that I never had the chance to say. Thank you,josie. You made me realise that he could be gone anytime. And sorry I post this note a little bit late. Accidentally post the poem without this.

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    July 10, 2008

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    Thank you for your powerfully penned entry, good luck in my contest, Josie