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at heavens request

fingers digging deeper
into satin smooth warm sheets
moans and purrs of ecstasy
long lost music to the room

 

a sensual feast of fluttering licks

and a deep caressing tongue 

the sweet aroma of lovemaking

a smell once was forgotten

 

arching back and nail scraps

breathless words of love

tears of joy and satisfaction

a pleasure freely given

 

 

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Picture Inspiredhttp://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc189/alycesombrez/lovers.jpg

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  • gllarso
    January 29

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    Beautiful!!

    Well done, there is so much here in so few words...they bring up vivid images of lovemaking without going into a lot of detail. Very beautiful and sensual.
    I think you mean "scrapes" instead of "scraps" in line 12.

    -Garrett


  • LittleMoon silver member
    January 20
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    Hmmmmmmmm nice, (as far as I can remember) lol
    Sheila


  • mrocun
    September 11, 2008

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    So very sensual indeed.
    Such a thick atmosphere you have built up here it's almost like a syrup that you can taste.

    Good work

    Samuel


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    July 25, 2008
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    oops forgot the clappies


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    July 25, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry. A sensual piece you have penned here. Juls

  • mcfreeman
    July 23, 2008
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    pleasure freely taken


  • Ho74pp1eP1e
    July 10, 2008

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    Very good sensual visual. It is lovely, with a little naughty. I like naughty lol. Well done and good luck in the contest.

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