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[ How the halls do beckon ]

How the halls do beckon
For thy sacred soul
For my creativity
Which I dearly hold

How the daylight do shine so brightly
But we're locked inside this grid
The computer screens are buzzing
Making us wish for death

The chains are locking up the doors
Making us all stay still
This new form of education
Designed to break and bend our will

Happiness we'll never know
This forever our prision cell
Broken and crippled
No way now to stand

The the system of injustice
Prospers Wins again
Another year of brainwashed teenagers
Made to work until their end

Tell me what you think, I really do want some honest feedback

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  • Sam-I-Am
    July 11, 2008

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    I like this actualy. I think it's pretty cool Can you please put a background tho? it makes it more attractive
    yeah, this is a good write marc, Awesome
    Sam