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Thalassa

Sirens wail their luring dirge not for any sordid love,
but born of enmity toward the goddess of the sea;
her beauty is felling with power bespelling - before
she speaks, beware! Oh man, beware the Mistress of the Sea!
Such mystery entices thee yet never satiates.

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Inspired by the picture, 'All That I Loved...' by Linda Bergkvist

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 11, 2008

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    Superb take on the picture. Beautiful word play, such a wonderful air of mystery to this piece. Thank you for your entry and good luck


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 10, 2008

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    Ahh yes, mystery is enticing isn't it.. but often leaves a bitter taste! Nice take on the picture!