The clouds particularly darkened tonight
And being alone at home
No one cares the sweet comforting whispers came softly
They told me what to do
The craving went through my worn-out veins
I walked through the street to where I knew it was
and then rushed back home
I lined up the coke and soon I felt warm
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lonely and very dark, mostly due to the use of drugs but it is deep

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whoa!
That put the shivers in me...thought I had to shit for a moment!Very vivid write,gave me a flashback from hell.After reading your page,I guess having a flashback means I MUST be a wastoid!!Great write!

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This is worded well, I like it.


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Ohh
This is good, i liked it. Wow
good write.



