Golden light
is what I seek
Feel its warmth
upon my cheek
Ebb and flow
of time and space
It is here
in this place
Natures splendor
for all to see
Here I rest
and let it be
A contest entry
- WHAT DO YOU SEE? [2] by skylark anointed.
800 points, ended August 6, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Zoe,
I wanted to come back and thank you for your entry into my contest. There is innocence and warmth captured in this piece. Your imagery is solid and it's possible that it would really shine in the free-verse style. Hope this advice is useful and I hope to read more of your work!
Best,
Andrea
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Hi Andrea
Thank you for your comment I really appreciate. As the writer you often get caught up in your own head about your poetry and getting someone elses opinion on it ...I think.... is terrific. Thank you once again.
Peace
Zoe
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