I break with the dawn, perhaps not to return
I come for your blessing, for a bit of your yesterday
For something from your history, the seed of the value
A bit of the courage to fly farther
And dream something better
Although everything will, still, be as it must be
I will go after my destiny
And perhaps to find the heart which your walls still murmur about
That ignites the fire inside me that turns simple people into heroes
To determine my course with value and make my home in your stars
To dream about being a libertarian and gain the kiss of an angel
When I am with you,
Nothing seems impossible
1,000 flags whisper "we are free" to the wind
When I am with you,
I feel the universe curling up in the palm of my hands
And nothing is impossible
Fly, pilgrim, be under another sun
Find yourself in the red of its dusk and the spell of its voice
Then return, and do your part, Son of Light
I will be the scenery and you the history
When you have the value
Nothing will be equal, when you begin to beieve
It is still listened between the centuries...
"If I were to find the heart which your walls still murmur about
If I ignited in my interior the ancestor fire of my heroes
Changing the world with value following the North in your stars
And one day when I am libertarian I will steal a kiss from the angel"
"When I am with you,
Nothing seems impossible
1,000 flags to the wind of our free towns
When I am with you,
I have the universe curled up in the palm of my hands
And nothing is impossible"
Give me your heart, my walls still await you
Ignite the fire in your interior:
You will see wood burning of heroes
Face the world with value following the North in my stars
You could be libertarian , dream the kiss of an angel
When I am with you
Nothing will be impossible to you
1,000 flags of towns will announce "we are free"
When I am with you,
All the universe will curl up in the palm of your hands
When I am with you...
Author notes
For the third time in a row, I wrote it in spanish ((Ecuador!!)) and spent a little while passing it into english so i could publish it here on AP =) so yeah, it kinda sucks, but i put it anyways, so.. wutevs!! jaja.. tell me what you thinkk!! =)
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It kept me through out
When you let your heart become attatched so deeply and your very young it is dangerous for at your age the mind still doesnt know what it wants yet .The adventure and the whispers are all there that sooths and makes you feel like eveything is perfect but more than often not . Young men honey will tell you anything and m,ake you feel like your the only one in the world that will make them happy . See how much truth is in these words when you tell them no when they want more than a kiss .For tocut them of their true colors always shines through and they will mve on .But to give them what they want in hopes they will stay they never do beacuse you see the one they want to love forever would never do this .Think about it and dont blame ourself and beat up on yourself because you believed every word . Oh no you get yourself up and right back out there and know you learned something from this day on . You learned that all those things your parents have told you were true .Not to grow up and wait until your true prince comes along will be well worth the wait for you will be older and weiser to protect yourself from this day on .I know I sound like a grandma but honey I know but believe me when that young man in time comes near you thats when you will know everything happens for a reason and as you look into his eyes you will know what that reason was.
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Thanks
But this was just a free write.. Although I guess I kinda did add to it some personal feeling and emotion..
I'm glad you liked it
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This is REALLY great!! And no, it doesn't sux. I have noticed that you are the type of writer who says that thinks sux when they r actually freckin awesome! LOVE THIS poem and all the others!
I could really use your help. If you could PLEASE check out some of my poems. I am new to AP! It would mean the world to me if you could help/suggest things. Especially coming from a pro!
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Jaja thank youuu
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wow this doesnt suck at all you are amazing oh my word this was so full of imagination and great discription your great!!!!! totally!!!!!!!
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aww thanks
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This was excellent. I loved the imagery it brought. The lines just flowed so eloquently, it FELT real, unlike a lot of poems I have read. I felt as if the wind had whispered it to me. It was just beautiful.
Great write,
Mel
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Thank you soooo much!!
With Broken Wings
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i like to watch you swipe the blade... fresh skin shedding blood smells good.. dontcha think??? youre never alone when youre cutting, you should know that by now... gabi lauzier
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not my favorite scent actually
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you know what i am thinking
you know who i am
why cant you see me? -
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wut the helll who are you?
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Why dont you reply?
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Kinda sucks....???? I WILL TELL YOU WHAT I THINK! (punch)
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who the hell are you?
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Thinking of you...
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wait.. what?? do i know you??
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i will cut myself in joy!
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enchanted, why, this poem has gotten me, myself, and I all in ooggles! every time... i read... i feel... POWERFUL! I can cut myself freely now, you have set me free. Thank you, i realized i am not afraid to die!
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AWesome poem. it was a i didn't get it good kinda way
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Huh?? What do you mean by " it was a i didn't get it good kinda way"??? [[thanks for the comment anyways!!]]
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Humm... very lovely poem Gabi.
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Thanks... Do I know you?? [[just asking]]
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Lovely! Not sure how you can say this is no good. I find it invigorating and deep. I loved the lines:
'When I am with you,
I have the universe curled up in the palm of my hands
And nothing is impossible"'
When you have love, you have the confidence to walk through walls. Thank you for sharing this.
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Thank Youuu!!!
I am so glad you liked itt
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I like it alot! it is strongly writen and I enjoyed it greatly.
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Thanks!!
I'm really glad you liked it!!
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