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[A] [D]amn [A]mazing [M]an

  T+10m
My first Pride,
it's going great.
Tomorrow's parade,
I cannot wait!
A sketchy ride,
staying up too late.

Just like it should be,
you can be yourself.
I can love you freely,
in sickness, in health.

Nothing but smiles,
and kind sweet words,
we walk for miles.
We fly like birds.

I love that you have
made me be Me,
just by being you.

  T=0
You wanting tea.
Black with 2 sugar.
Perfectly steeped!
It's just right!
and all of my scruples
..blown out of sight!

I had thought it neared perfect,
then I knew in such a small span,
that we'd be with out defect.
That you'd be my man!
I danced your ass hard,
and we played some more games.
Back to my place,
yet we kept it way tame.
Back on the bus,
just to come back again,
Not even a fuss,
We went for lo mein.
You gave me some treasures,
of which I held dear,
a gesture beyond measure.
Oh its good to be queer!

  T+~2w
The next time you came,
we had lots more fun.
Then surprisingly I was to blame,
if you reread the end of line one!

  T+~1m
After more dates,
I dropped the L bomb,
some things can't wait,
plus you had the "approval of Mom"!

  T=Forever
I will love you for ever,
rep'd by that ring.
Hurt you I'll never.
It's such a beautiful thing.

My first ever Pride.
It's not an event,
but a feeling inside.
That's what i meant!

Author notes

Originally writted in text message to myself for i was lacking a pen, or light to write it while in bed after two consecutive days of no sleepm intoxication, and plenty of exploration and splendor. <3

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Comments


  • My teeth pinch
    July 27, 2008
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    fun fun fun fun
    so happy!


  • edit my world.
    July 10, 2008

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    lol i did my english project while using my sidekick...gotta 100...so who ever said cellular devices ruin the minds are lame!.

    anyway i loved this...loved the rhyming, loved how it flowed...it put a smile on my face when i got finished reading it. and thats something that hasnt been there in weeks...so applause for that...great read for anyone needing a smile i'd say

    ♥Dani